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Friday, November 18, 2011

Ahead of me, they quickly crossed the road, thus... two haiku with the effort of one.


this sunrise
melts away a night of frost
the deer move

two deer
cross my morning path
breath clouds

14 comments:

John McDonald said...

well caught
john

Tikkis said...

When visiting Lappland I'm afraid of reindeers wandering in the roads. Reindeer is smaller than an elk (deer) and collision with a reindeer is mostly cosmetic.

Collision with a bigger elk is dangerous; the animal comes through the windscreen (-shield) on your belly. Many drivers died.

from the thicket
a reindeer came to look
spacious highway

Frank... said...

Two very nice haiku...

Lorraine said...

very very beautiful Doug

sandy said...

what a nice start to your day!
breath clouds--I love that!

Judie said...

Doug, thanks once again for a sensitive and meaningful comment to my post.

I have seen those breath clouds many times in the forest. They are exciting, yet peaceful.

Margie said...

Gosh, these are both wonderful!

Henrique Pimenta said...

São imagens selvagens - em que a vida nos reensina a ter olhos abertos às suas fascinações.

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Magyar said...

Thanks. John and Frank!
__Tikkis, the reindeer counting cars? Lovit!
__LL, two haiku -two very(s)-? ;<)
Thanks!
__Sandy, that warm nostrel breath, the cold air...
__Judie... I could go on and on, and on. Oh, I think I said that!
__Margie... why is it I always think less of my "scribbles" than their readers do?
__Pepper Henry... Our eyes, the keys that open our imaginations.

I truely thank you all for your glowing comments! As always!
_m

FiveReflections said...

Your frosty morning canvas, although melting, makes me want to zip up my jacket!

Your 'scribbles' are always enjoyable!

Gillena Cox said...

nice one haiku couple
much love...

Kelly Marszycki said...

it's always a gift to see deer in the landscape -- beautiful!

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