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Sunday, April 1, 2012

We've all seen cats... stalk a shadow;  this, from last summer's scribble book.

the shadow 
caught by this stalker cat
a humming bird


Karol Rosiak said...

Wow, I love it, great haiku, Magyar.

John McDonald said...

love it

TALON said...

Love this imagery,D. Poor hummingbird! Stripey is applauding ;)

Rita Odeh said...

If I were you, I would change L3 in order to add mystery/layers to this stunning ku. You give chance to reader to imagine/guess/decide for himself what the shadow was. Thus, you turn him into an active reader and guarantee his satisfaction:

a shadow
caught by the stalker cat..
morning stillness

May I invite you and all the haiku friends to join the first International Kukai?
Details on my blog:

Geraldine said...

Wonderful Magyar. Love your cat haiku most of all!

sandy said...

I am hoping it wasn't the hummingbird.
Thanks for reminding me that I was going to put up the feeder today.

Magyar said...

Thanks all... your kind comments!
__One can wonder:
1, Did the cat catch the shadow or the hummingbird, the kigo of this haiku;

2, do I (we) chase shadows, a metaphor for the dreams we have;

3, can we all be from time to time, the shadow, the prey?

__Smiles all! _m

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