We've all seen cats... stalk a shadow; this, from last summer's scribble book.
the shadow
caught by this stalker cat
a humming bird
- Magyar
- Cape Cod, United States
- __I see with young eyes, an old mirror. Here, I hope to offer... as I see.
9 comments:
Wow, I love it, great haiku, Magyar.
K.
love it
john
Love this imagery,D. Poor hummingbird! Stripey is applauding ;)
If I were you, I would change L3 in order to add mystery/layers to this stunning ku. You give chance to reader to imagine/guess/decide for himself what the shadow was. Thus, you turn him into an active reader and guarantee his satisfaction:
a shadow
caught by the stalker cat..
morning stillness
May I invite you and all the haiku friends to join the first International Kukai?
Details on my blog:
http://rita-odeh.blogspot.com
Wonderful Magyar. Love your cat haiku most of all!
I am hoping it wasn't the hummingbird.
Thanks for reminding me that I was going to put up the feeder today.
Thanks all... your kind comments!
__One can wonder:
1, Did the cat catch the shadow or the hummingbird, the kigo of this haiku;
2, do I (we) chase shadows, a metaphor for the dreams we have;
3, can we all be from time to time, the shadow, the prey?
__Smiles all! _m
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Magyar!
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