Compare the "contraries." The icicle the candle, the drop, the flame... "contraries," and each, the beginning of contrary results.
one drop lingers
at winter's last icicle
a candle flame
- Magyar
- Cape Cod, United States
- __I see with young eyes, an old mirror. Here, I hope to offer... as I see.
8 comments:
i loved that imagery here, Magyar :)
wishes,
devika
its very clever and very beautiful. i really like this one.
delightful
john
I'm glad someone else contemplates these things. I like it.
Well captured - I like this.
last icicle—
waiting for the drop
to drop
Bill, thanks for -dropping- bye, I like your echo! I thank you all for your comments! _m
A friend sent me an email about oxymorons and asked that i add one, what came to my mind was Hot ice; a bit like the theme of your haiku
much love
gillena
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