As inspired by Nora's haiku of yesterday; one wonders... who planted this tree, and who that bird might be.
this pear tree
in blossoms of memory
a bird tends
- Magyar
- Cape Cod, United States
- __I see with young eyes, an old mirror. Here, I hope to offer... as I see.
11 comments:
interesting- the use the word 'tends'
much love
gillena
oh thats lovely
really lovely, Magyar. A lovely, poignant image.
There are many blossoms in spring-haiku. These are special. I like it!
Best wishes
Ralf
a unique approach to blossom haiku.
i like it
Interesting, Magyar
whoever it is some one should be there to tend, :)
wishes,
devika
M,
I find this interesting. I am not sure I have read anything like it. But it does tell a story doesn't it.
Well done.
T
_I thank you, friends, for your comments.
_When I was a boy, my grandmother planted a pear tree, and tended to its needs each season, 'till she passed.
_With Nora's haiku I instantly remembered; in fiction here, my mind I saw a bird flitting about through its limbs, tending to the tree's care.
_m
What a unique and tend(er) image Magyar - love this.
in a blossoming
pear tree --
hototogisu!
"tends" is very good indeed, quite believable as observation and rich in association.
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