Shouting chapmen... most pigeons scatter.
street sellers
tout their worldly wears
pigeons
- Magyar
- Cape Cod, United States
- __I see with young eyes, an old mirror. Here, I hope to offer... as I see.
Tuesday, May 19, 2009
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I have seen this scene, Magyar :)
wishes,
devika
good one :)
Nice one...
Oh my gosh, I can only imagine what could happen, I love this...
PS I ADORED your comment on my words and stuff yesterday, so, so beautiful, thank you
Ah, the urban landscape. I like how you capture the public space where hawkers and pigeons and the rest of us birds converge. :-)
New York pigeons don't scatter easily.
To me the contrast between yesterday's communication (pigeon) and all-time-advertisement (touting street sellers) is great. First I didn't understand "worldly" then I thoughtyou don't want me to see street prophets. Good haiku, _m.
Best wishes
Ralf
This is great - well put.
pigeons --
My brother is an ornithologist, and when I was younger I went with him to seek so many different birds as possible. City-pigeon! I shouted when still in town-area.
It's not counted as a bird, he said.
traveling salesman
trying to hide
his origin
(This is nearly nothing to do with your senryu, I'm afraid.)
I thank you all!
...and then, there is that slang definition of "pigeon," the poor "believer," taken in by every sales pitch.
_m
Interesting! Opened my slang dictionaries and found that, and some more meanings, too.
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