This silliness of rain drops putting out the 'fires.' Oh, not to worry... they all 're-lit!' This, a second posting.
fire flies
in this night's soft rain
pfsst pfsst pfsst
- Magyar
- Cape Cod, United States
- __I see with young eyes, an old mirror. Here, I hope to offer... as I see.
12 comments:
Lovely! Takes me back to childhood! I loved to see the fireflies when I was a little girl.
An elegant haiku Magyar...
I really like the last line! :))
but then soft rain in the night and fire flies are also my favourites :)
so in total, an enjoyable one, Magyar :)
wishes,
devika
I would love to see a firefly...we don't have them here. What a delightful haiku Magyar.
You make me smile in the most wonderful way, how neat this is...
Resilient little critters. Do you really have fireflies already, or are you anticipating?
You made me smile, Magyar. I love it!
nice one M
john
The idea of the picture and the sound of the last line make me think of slow-motion-bullets. Some weeks agi I read a short story, in which a soldier tried to catch the Glühwürmchen ... and then it was his dream and his death.
Oh, forgot to say that I like it.
Best wishes
Ralf
Though we love our time at the pond... it's nice to return home and hook-up, the wireless there is weak to nonexistant.
My friends... I thank you all for your visits and comments.
Bill, this was left as a comment a few years back, and the now 'random' tinywords... it is here, in your word, anticipation.
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How delightful! Just loved this.
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