An "E" link, I thank you all. _m
anemones
bursting in this night's sky
fireworks
- Magyar
- Cape Cod, United States
- __I see with young eyes, an old mirror. Here, I hope to offer... as I see.
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Haiku, Senryu, and an occasional Haibun or Cinquain
10 comments:
It is the strong verb which transforms the flowers. Nice one, _m.
Best wishes
Ralf
picturesque one,
Happy Independence Day, Magyar :)
wishes,
devika
A nice juxtaposition of images. I love the word bursting and the enery it gives to the haiku...
dazzled firely
in the dark evening --
fireworks!
Lovely visual, so vibrant and independent ;)
Ah! A perfect blossom of a hiaku, Magyar. Very well captured! I can just see it unfolding in the sky just so.
nice; i like the choice of juxtaposed images
much love
gillena
Magyar, i agree with Ralf ... bursting is perfect in this strong haiku.
very visual...!
Anemones... landlocked or seabound, radial arms thar reach out to us from their central point.
I thank you all... _m
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