The Canada geese; this, first seen at Tinywords, 9-6-07.
moonrise...
geese argue
with their shadows
- Magyar
- Cape Cod, United States
- __I see with young eyes, an old mirror. Here, I hope to offer... as I see.
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Haiku, Senryu, and an occasional Haibun or Cinquain
14 comments:
Interesting one, Magyar :)
in more ways than one,
wishes,
devika
The magic of you, I love this _m :)
Yes, the birds know the seasons are changing, before we do even.
Nice catch. Those geese are a cranky bunch.
perfect!
Nicely observed moment...
great one m
john
Playful..."love it!"
Nice one Magyar, who would not argue with ones shadow at moonrise?
Now I understand that the wings and shadows of the wings are arguing in the moonlight. Sometimes I need my time to see the thing I didn't see in reality. We always should take our time when reading a haiku.
Well done!
Best wishes
Rudi
I concur with Andrew. I absolutely love this.
hay(ka)na!
Continuing the rain - theme:
squall of rain --
shadows
flattening out
mmmmmm.. hay ka na ΓΆΓΆ#¤&.
But a nice idea, anyway? ?_)
- You know Japanese "kana", a word which quite often is the last word in a waka or tanka and in haiku;
I think that this "kana" means nearly nothing, could be translated as "well" or "I think" etc.
Very often this is perhaps just to make last line 5 - syllabses (or sounds)... ?
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