As yet, no snow here; this... from last winter.
footfalls
tracks that find the dawn
night snow
- Magyar
- Cape Cod, United States
- __I see with young eyes, an old mirror. Here, I hope to offer... as I see.
Thursday, December 3, 2009
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leaving no footprints
they walk into dawn
snow men
Never seen snow or snowmen in my life -- except in movies/books and in some haiku blogs last year...yes, its that time of the year again! :)
Good haiku, and you seem badly missing cold and snow! :)
wishes,
devika
__Thanks, Dev... another way of seeing these three lines... and very well reasoned, I would say.
__It was, though, a dawning across the previous night's snowfall; leading directly into that sunrise (-find the dawn-,) were the footfalls of a deer._m
so nice to have that note, Magyar :)
wishes,
devika
excellent - M
john
How lovely, I see it, midnight prints :) so light and pretty
i see it too and could breath its track, love the image conjured by the poem...
Lovely, _m. You paint a beautiful picture of my friend, Old Man Winter. ;) Love it.
We may get a little tomorrow night. Also out of the past:
kicking the snow
off my boots--
a light in the window
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