Last night.
a candle
hides this night's darkness
the tea steams
- Magyar
- Cape Cod, United States
- __I see with young eyes, an old mirror. Here, I hope to offer... as I see.
Thursday, January 7, 2010
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Haiku, Senryu, and an occasional Haibun or Cinquain
14 comments:
Sounds wonderful!
Amazing that such a few words can create such peace.
A very evocative haiku...
Terrific...I can see the steam rising! Thanks for joining in the fun at Haiku Bones.
Love the feeling this haiku creates within me. Thanks.
look at it, steam has its tea!
second candle
burnt out - tea cup empty
just silence
just felt like adding my bit, Magyar...hope you don't mind! :)
wishes,
devika
__Not at all, Dev, add as you will, and as a note, I really like your -Winter Warming-. _m
thank you Magyar :)
wishes,
devika
"hides the night's darkness" - what beautiful imagery.
And now I've got to go and make a cup of tea :)
I agree most evocative
john
a very cozy haiku :)
I like your profile shot. Very Holmes-ian. I need to get a pipe. I'm not sure I could pull it off. I suppose I would have to start smoking first. Life is so complicated.
just read all of your haikus, again. love em.
Lovely visual. Cozy, comforting and very creative!
Oh, this is perfect...
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