This, is an echo left at Sandy's 'Four Winds Haiga' blog, in complement to her fine post of 3/6/2010.
twilight robin
his breast is the sunset
a night song fades
- Magyar
- Cape Cod, United States
- __I see with young eyes, an old mirror. Here, I hope to offer... as I see.
9 comments:
What a beautiful echo. I can't wait until we see the robins here again. Then I'll know that spring has arrived.
WOW! This is just beautiful...wish I had a better word. Using a metaphor instead of a simile makes the statement about the robin so much stronger. I truly love this, Doug.
Sincerely,
Kristin
delightful M
john
Beautiful sleep iducement with images, well done Doug :)
... an evanescent sculpture...
Just exquisite, Magyar. Thank you for this gem.
I just can see the little Robin! Beautiful words!
this is very beautiful, a wonderful evening haiku
Welcome Henrique, and thank you!
__I thank you all for your very kind comments! _m
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