__Home from our pond; this from last night as we sat on the dark deck... and watched the spider's work.
candles
light this darkness
a spider
- Magyar
- Cape Cod, United States
- __I see with young eyes, an old mirror. Here, I hope to offer... as I see.
12 comments:
Sounds like a beautiful way to spend an evening, Magyar. :)
Quite visual.
One can almost imagine the orange coloured flickering of the candles
shinning on a spider´s web.
It gave me peace of mind.
Thank you M.
Zen ! Yes.
Sounds like a koan to me - I love it!
have a great week:)
Very nice haiku, Magyar...
The image this creates is soft soothing and oh so delightful Magyar.
Love this!
nice one M
john
Thanks for letting me watch it with you, love what you showed here...
What an enjoyable evening sitting on your deck with a candle in the dark and seeing the spider.
Saw a spider doing his work on a fly yesterday. Reminded that it's just nature at work--though I don't care to watch for too long!
Lieber Magyar,
selbst wenn du keine erklärenden Worte für deine Haikus hättest, du schreibst so klar und ausdrucksstark, dass man sofort weiß, was du damit meinst...
ich bewundere dich dafür...
herzlich, Rachel
I can read a/b and b/c as two stories. Or I take all of the lines as two sides of the medal. Very fine one.
Best wishes
Ralf
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