This, as seen in Ambrosia Edition 2.
blue jays clamor
in this noonday sun
the brook's echo
- Magyar
- Cape Cod, United States
- __I see with young eyes, an old mirror. Here, I hope to offer... as I see.
Tuesday, May 18, 2010
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9 comments:
You pack so much into such well chosen words, Magyar. This is beautiful!
Don't forget : jays are sentinels.
Beautiful haïku.
Lieber Magyar,
meine Bewunderung hast du immer wieder!
Alles Liebe für dich,
Rachel
A lovely haiku, Magyar...
I'm right there with him....hidden
May rainfall--
a sunray sparks a raindrop
on a leaf
much love
gillena
How I miss my beloved babbling brook... I believe the blue jays followed me here :)
For me a delightfully poignant haiku Magyar.
Lots of nice sounds here.
love it M
john
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