__From my scribble pad of last Saturday night as we watched the red cresent moon setting; and the doves will coo at night.
moonset
beyond the west shore pines
doves coo
- Magyar
- Cape Cod, United States
- __I see with young eyes, an old mirror. Here, I hope to offer... as I see.
12 comments:
A very nice juxtaposition of images - a calming haiku...
Well, my dictionary offered me at least two ways to read this. Indeed: many layers in this ;-) Great haiku, Issa-like.
Best wishes
Ralf
Soft and beautiful, Magyar. That crescent moon was something else, wasn't it? I love hearing the doves at dusk - they're soothing.
Nice, Magyar :)
I wrote this at Borut's the other day...he too wrote about red crescent,
red cresent
behind the clouds
i borrow his specs
wishes,
devika
sweetest melody ever...I breathe it in
what a calming scenery...
And, I can hear them when I read this.
moonrise
out in my backyard
pigeons making whoopee
delightful
john
Oh my...what beautiful imagery. I love this, Doug!
Very pictorisk Magyar, and layers of silence wowed :)
__Thanks, friends... for your gracious comments; Jens... good to hear from you, I hope all is well!
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