__There are some flowers that only bloom at night, thus, they take advantage of that night's flies to procreate. "Shame on me; a metaphor... in something I've labled -haiku-."
light fades
beyond these sunset hills
night blossoms
- Magyar
- Cape Cod, United States
- __I see with young eyes, an old mirror. Here, I hope to offer... as I see.
15 comments:
I love the double meaning here, Doug. Beautiful!
An atmospheric haiku, Magyar...
Oh so beautiful!
"Old men get some soldiers, keep them close at hand,
The seeds that were sown yesterday now flower in the land
And guard yourself most carefully with military might.
For plants that cannot bloom by day must flower in the night"
"Flowers of the Night"
Night blooming flowers are some of the most fragrant....Beautiful haiku, Magyar :)
wishes,
devika
Beautiful words - I love 'night blossomss'!
Have a lovely day:)
Joo
nice one M
john
the night to my day
wasn't it perfect?
I can see it, so beautiful ...calming spirits
Lieber Magyar,
wieder so spärliche, doch starke Worte für ein großes, faszinierendes Bild, was du damit schaffst...
ich bin wie immer begeistert
herzlichst, Rachel
Lovely, Magyar - Your haiku are always so "spot-on" and insightful. Love them!
War
Just terrific, Magyar. That one will stick with me. Thank you.
very meaningful and expressive haiku---.
Associations has been used in Haiku, and even in the masterpieces. thanks for this
Evocative and perceptive - love this M.
Beautiful!
I can see the flowers... I have some of this kind in my garden, too...they are yellow and fragrant.
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