Some changes.
this wreath
pearled with new snow
a bell
- Magyar
- Cape Cod, United States
- __I see with young eyes, an old mirror. Here, I hope to offer... as I see.
Wednesday, December 8, 2010
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Haiku, Senryu, and an occasional Haibun or Cinquain
14 comments:
lovely lovely snow haiku; especilly like Line Two
much love
gillena
Your haiku always paint a perfect and complete picture in my mind, D.
So appropriate for the season too...delightful haiku M.
'pearled with new snow' - I love it!
how delightful!
what a beautiful image is so few words!
well done M
john
Oh that is so beautiful Doug, I see I hear and I love
Wreath? No! if may say, you have a bouquet here, Magyar...be sure to pass it on! :)
Beautiful haiku,
wishes,
devika
__My friends, I thank all of you; your comments had overcome me!
__The change. I'm attempting to return to [as I rightly or wrongly consider] proper haiku, scribbled at the moment it occurs, and too, the avoidance of my over-used "crutch" word... -this-.
__To repeat! I thank you all! _m
...kigo finest haiku, you feel the icy "young" freshness of the snow, a delight...
gabriele
__Good to see you again Gabriele, thanks for your visit and kind comment!
_m
bela imagem
Indeed, this achievement is a real wonder, thank you for this article in any case.
voyante
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