The parade.
this river flows
down the tarmac
a pretzel
- Magyar
- Cape Cod, United States
- __I see with young eyes, an old mirror. Here, I hope to offer... as I see.
Tuesday, March 29, 2011
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Haiku, Senryu, and an occasional Haibun or Cinquain
9 comments:
I hope this a poem of spring run-off and not flooding! I love the pretzel image, D.
yes quite the image, gives me hope Doug :)
Well it could either be a real pretzel, or a cloverleaf in the stream. Either way, a nice poem.
I can see that pretzel pattern.
it the swirling water reminding you or is there really a pretzel in the river? either way a nice tease :)
much love...
Lovit Magyar! Delightful observation :)
well caught M
john
A nice observation, Magyar...
__This... wandered back several years and a situation that revolved around and about several friends. I just hope they know how Kathy and I care about them._m
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