At the pond, thunder storms during the last three evenings... but the hummingbirds still visited the nectar feeders... in the beginning rains.
__If I used the word -the- (I think) it could point to -all- hummingbirds; the word -this- [I rightly (or wrongly) think] refers to... that -one- hummingbird in my sight... the one that spawned my "Scribble" below.
thunder
of this hummingbirds wings
rain drops
- Magyar
- Cape Cod, United States
- __I see with young eyes, an old mirror. Here, I hope to offer... as I see.
10 comments:
Oh, this is grand!
I heard that thundering sound just today! When the feeder is empty or clogged with bees, they always come to fetch me!!
I almost see them:)
Have a nice week!
we had thunderstorms as well..I love hummingbirds!!! I will sit in my swing and watch them for the longest..I loved this one!!!
Yes, that is one lovely hummingbird tucked inside your lovely haiku, D!
lovely M
john
beautiful, they love it I'm sure, what a beautiful portrait you painted with your words
All little birds share joy...
So good to see you all!!!!!
tnx, _m
thunder of the humming bird wings....so silent it must have been --
and yes, thanks for the explanation to using "this" -- no, it is not about right or wrong Magyar...but i thought "the" could as well refer to a specific hummingbird...or whatever referred specifically,
wishes,
devika
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