__This haiku was contributed to, and seen in the anthology, "One Thousand Cranes" in 2009; it was scribbled during the winter of 2007.
snow fills
this cabins shattered bones
a broken tea cup
- Magyar
- Cape Cod, United States
- __I see with young eyes, an old mirror. Here, I hope to offer... as I see.
13 comments:
nice one M
john
Lovely haiku:)
Have a great day!
j.
I love everything old, and it never really breaks, when the first piece crash it goes straight toheaven, well, Merry X-mas
Lieber Magyar,
ein tolles Haiku, eins was fast nach Historie klingt, nach Wiedergefundenem nach langer Zeit...
Ich lese zu gern bei dir, und ich versuche mich jetzt auch in Haiku, lach...doch es sind Anfänge...
dir eine feine Adventzeit
von Herzen
Rachel
Wouldn't you love to know the history of that place?
Of that teacup?
Hello Magyar,
This is really a nice haiku, I love the imagenery of this one, I sense even a bit of Zen.
Why Zen? A broken teacup triggered me, because I once have read a Zen item about an empty teacup.
Empty isn't always empty, but the spirit of the emptiness is in it.
Namaste,
PS. I have a question. Do you have had your copy of Spasms Of Light already? Because I don't have it yet.
Sincerely,
I wish I could write haiku but I can't but am very glad I have yours to read.
As always, excellent writing!
Just gorgeous, D. Such perfect imagery.
like the resonance of coldness; the snow; the broken tea cup; a really well crafted ku
however warm wishes and
much love...
I'm so pleased when I people like my 'scribbles!' I truely thank you ALL... for your comments! _m
This is a lovely haiku, Magyar. I do like the words, 'shattered bones'...
Reminds me of a scene from the film "Jeremiah Johnson," one of my favorites!
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