From an old "scribble book;" the sunset and the heron on the wing, had enhanced the pond's lure.
days close
across this sunset pond
a great blue
days close
across this sunset pond
a great blue
- Magyar
- Cape Cod, United States
- __I see with young eyes, an old mirror. Here, I hope to offer... as I see.
15 comments:
A beautiful, tranquil scene Magyar. I'd like to be seeing it live right now...sigh...
Jen, I thank you, your well recieved comment! At the at day's close, that sunset across the pond could be termed "a stellar campfire"? _m
day yawns
golden finger paints the sky
moon smiles
some times the only way I can comment to you lovely inspirations is to write!
Moonie; echoes.
__If... what I scribble inspires such an echo as your comment... my etchings, then, are not in vain! I sincerly thank you! _m
Oh Doug you give me such peace, something I can never find, I don't have enough money to get away, so I come here to be soothed
Oh, a pond's lure... It will always work on me... :-)
Wonderful scene you've painted here!
__Oh LL, I'm so glad that, that whice I see and record, isn't valueless; so happy you are soothed.
__Always _m
__'The Chick with a Quill,' good to hear your >bird song< Vesper, and I thank you for your kind comment!
the fresh sun
sets aside the sour fog
bird song
__Oooops! You've seen that haiku before; smiles! _m
You have painted this scene beautifully in my soul, Doug...thank you~
Jan
no ripples the ponds blueness deepens
much love...
The apostrophe (day's) does make a difference. Nice moment.
Lieber Magyar,
hier lässt es sich verweilen, einen feinen Augenblick hast du aufgefangen...
Alles nur Gute für dich
von Herzen
Rachel
Thanks Jan and Gliiena!
__Bill, I severly minimize punctuation in that which I term haiku/senryu, just another >guess< for the readers; thanks for your observation!
__Rachel, we would all like to extend those finer moments; memories hold them forever close. Thank you for your good wishes... as I return them to you! _m
I do like line three!
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