__Is the snow hawk waiting for its shadow, 0r is the shadow... waiting for another hawk? _m
this snow hawk
flies away from its shadow
another waits
this snow hawk
flies away from its shadow
another waits
- Magyar
- Cape Cod, United States
- __I see with young eyes, an old mirror. Here, I hope to offer... as I see.
12 comments:
I love this, what if...a shadow feels the breeze as well, how imaginative of you Dear Doug
Thank you Lorraine; I, attempt my return to a Roark-ish trailway.
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Go for it and never stop....until you wish it DD
its like yesterday vanishing into another today
lovely haiku
much love...
I like the sense of mystery here,
__Gillena and Juliet, I thank you both!
__Just think... what if it was an over-cast day? Smiles! _m
So beautiful, Doug!
OOOOOOOOOH:
__Thanks Kim! Such a good feeling
to see your comment! _m
This is simply amazing, Doug!
The image... the philosophy... There's so much in these three lines...
Thanks Cora!
__We all... leave our images behind... even, if our shadows are "unseen".
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hawks game
field mouse invited
shadows pay their own
Thank you Moonie !!!
__I lovit first when a visitor visits, and especially when they leave such a nifty echo!
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