One Sonnet form, as some would argue against; I scribbled this "Found" and others... long ago.
>Found<
I stand apart, watching through your sorrow,
With tears at the loss of a love begone.
You wander that circle, as you are drawn,
To that lonely search for your tomorrow;
With your heart so full, your mind so fallow,
In your eyes the lost hope of new love's dawn,
You silently stand, as a misplaced pawn.
This a deep search, to forestall your barrow.
With offered touch, another's lonely goal;
I see her full glean, her deepened mire,
Beyond this surge of her lone desire.
She sends her full heart to your lonely soul,
And in joyful tone, it sates your fire.
With her song of love, the steeple bells toll.
>Found<
I stand apart, watching through your sorrow,
With tears at the loss of a love begone.
You wander that circle, as you are drawn,
To that lonely search for your tomorrow;
With your heart so full, your mind so fallow,
In your eyes the lost hope of new love's dawn,
You silently stand, as a misplaced pawn.
This a deep search, to forestall your barrow.
With offered touch, another's lonely goal;
I see her full glean, her deepened mire,
Beyond this surge of her lone desire.
She sends her full heart to your lonely soul,
And in joyful tone, it sates your fire.
With her song of love, the steeple bells toll.
10 comments:
Oh how beautiful...I am left utterly speechless...overcome with emotion.
This is absolutely amazing...:))
This reads beautifully.. like one humming a melodious tune :D
Well penned..!
Your "long ago" Shakespearian period methinks.
Very beautiful and so touching, _m. Gently poetic and hypnotic...so much so, that I hated to stop reading when I came to the end...so, I read it again twice over. Everyone knows that good things come in threes~
Jan
I thought that was beautiful. Well done!
Im glad you found it Doug. It's lovely
Lonely fog horn
breakers hide what's broken
love must live on
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_m
That was simply amazing :D Bravo!!
elegant ~
From me, you are all due... profound gratitude. _m.
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