__Now, this is a rare rewrite I applied to one of my posts that originated during August, 2009; it was our walk around a nearby cranberry bog.
goldenrod
aside this dusty path
bee's sneeze
goldenrod
aside this dusty path
bee's sneeze
Haiku, Senryu, and an occasional Haibun or Cinquain
9 comments:
Gesundheit!
I'd love to hear that....wow how I love your Haikus, always DD
__Sorry, LL... you'll have to imagine the "Ahh-choos!" Smiles, are my thanks to you.
__Egeszsegedre_! Gwil W; smiles and thanks.
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Perfect..._m!
Only the pollinator, the bee, would sneeze from the beautiful Goldenrod wildflower~
How powerfully your words transport me there too...I swear I can practically smell the flowers and hear the hum of the bees!
Oh this is simply magical...:))
__Thanks, Jan_. Npw, let us imagination this for the sense of a sneeze relief: Beenex not Kleenex. _m
__"Y" I feel you are far too generous as you compliment my "scribbles"; I blush, while you soften my humility, and I thank you "Y"_! _m
sooo sweet.
child's nose tickled
bee admires the beauty
giggle shared
you do inspire - Moonie :)
what's a nature :)
all the best, Magyar
__Mooney... I think they'd they both laugh_!
Twitchy noses; a child and bee pass through; pollen cloud.
__Ahhhh, the nature of our sneezes, Iris_!
I thank you, "Dear Ladies"_! _m
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