__The sunset shadows; this, a slim adjustment made to my imaginational comment I left at Iris's good haiku blog. The number of "S-es" now seems less cumbersome than I first thought. Ssmiless!
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sleepy swan
swims across my chest
sunset
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sleepy swan
swims across my chest
sunset
11 comments:
Oh, I really like this one! Evocative!
A beautiful moment, Magyar...
What a lovely picture you have painted with your "S-es"~
So beautiful... really amazing!
The "swims across my chest" made me smile thinking about my cat who often takes naps across my husband's chest... :-)
Thank you for your kind wishes at my blog, Doug. Merry Christmas to you and your loved ones! Good health and happiness!
Oh yes, the haiku is beyond our world, lovely. Have a beautiful season of good will as well.
Seasons Greetings, Magyar & all the best for the New Year!
Thanks for the visit and thoughtful wishes!
I am in contact with Lorraine and when I speak to her again (this week)I shall pass your greetings along to her.
I truly enjoyed your poem.
Best wishes to you and your family for a wonderful Christmas and happy New Year.
Great one M and may I wish you and yours a joyous Christmas and happy new year
Magyar
Thanks for sharing at "Lets Haiku A Christmas Carol 2015"
much love...
Sentimental and oh so beautiful, like the man who wrote it, phenomenal the very best of everything to you DD and your loving family xo
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__Thanks and a very Merry Christmas to you, all my friends; Margie and LL its been a long time! I hope all is well_!
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