__Time now, that I return to fewer words as I follow this well known saying, 'Less is ... .' _m
train whistle
wheels thunder on the tracks
smell of rain
train whistle
wheels thunder on the tracks
smell of rain
- Magyar
- Cape Cod, United States
- __I see with young eyes, an old mirror. Here, I hope to offer... as I see.
12 comments:
I love the feel of this!
locomotion and
commotion...
fill the air
wonderful...loving this _m!!!
Jen and Jan, [or is it Jan and Jen_? Smiles_!] Rain, so often arrives with thunder.
__For your understanding comments, I offer my acute thanks to you both! _m
(and now again . . .)
whistle blows
now look along the line
- see what's coming?
I love the romantic sound of a train whistle in the distance...
The train whistles, fantastic.
Lieber Magyar,
und wieder lässt du Bilder hier, die so herrlich am inneren Auge vorüberziehen.
LG; Rachel
__I thank you, Guil, Keith and Bob_! Those distant sounds... the thunder, an owl, steeple bells, fog horns, a ship's tone, that fox's howl, the wind in the trees, and many more... all, are calls to imagine.
__Ah Rachel, those inner eyes can see so much more, I truly thank you. _m
and i could see, hear and feel it. nice.
who needs more when you write such excellent haiku. Wow the senses are full steam ahead with this one.
So evocative...the distant sound of a train rolling along the rails...heralding the approaching thunder?
Very nice...took me far away from this unremarkable day!:))
__As always... Sandy, Moonie, and "Y", I vigorously value your visits and views_!
Smiles. _m
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