__ We watched that night pond; as a Swan paddled by, the stars' reflections danced in her wake. 5/22/2013
a swan swirls
upon this silent pond
the stars dance
a swan swirls
upon this silent pond
the stars dance
- Magyar
- Cape Cod, United States
- __I see with young eyes, an old mirror. Here, I hope to offer... as I see.
9 comments:
That's a great painting in words!
Lovely! I can see it clearly.
Nice sounds and rythm.
As I scan my 'scribble books' I sometimes find reasonable 'scratches' from those moments past.
__ Sandy, Daniele and Gwilym, I fully appreciate your visits and understanding comments; I thank you all. _m
Eine wunderbare Ansicht, die du uns in Worten präsentierst, ein Haiku-Theaterstück!!!
Ganz lieb
Rachel
Lovely! I always tend to be drawn by bird haiku. Thank you for resharing this one! Are you on Twitter or Instagram, by any chance? I'm realizing more and more that keeping up with blogs is difficult for me and I'm probably going to be closing mine down, but I would very much like to keep up with you and your work.
__ Best luck G.L., I'm sure I'll find your work from time to time as dreams on. Smiles_! _m
Magyar, just so you know, there is some amazing poetry being shared on Twitter -- well worth checking out. I shall also try to drop in here from time to time. Blessings to you, and thank you for your support. It means a lot! :)
It's amazing when you find a good content in today's internet.
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