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Wednesday, August 25, 2010

The tide; the tailor.

each wave
an ocean's stitch
hemming our seas and land
thus bound as one our tender earth
the tide

12 comments:

TALON said...

You pick your words so carefully and the images are superb. "ocean's stitch" - that is just beyond lovely! Gorgeous, Magyar!

I wish we treated the earth as tenderly as she deserves.

joo said...

As always I'm impressed by your words!
Greetings:)

Lorraine said...

I LOVE so much...

sandy, from gardenpath said...

What a fitting word image of how the sea ties the earth together. Very nice.

BB said...

The "ocean´s stich" part also grabbed my attention.
Personally i think this is one of your best Haiku´s so far.
Short yet deep and filled with a brilliant use of the English language.

Magyar said...

Thank you all, my friends!
__This was an instant's response, a comment, an echo left at Annie's blog -Inkhaven-. You'd not be dissapointed if you visit there... the link is in the right column.
__Thanks again! _m

Janice Thomson said...

It's so good to be reading you again M - often our thoughts are as one as I am sure it is with many of your readers. A superb post.

John McDonald said...

very good M
john

Gillena Cox said...
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Gillena Cox said...

a beautiful metaphor expressedly sewing us together in cinquain; happy to be a part of this fabric of expression


much love
gillena

Frank said...

A lovely image, Magyar...

Gerry Snape said...

Having just come back late last night from Cornwall this resonates so with all that we have seen and done over the week. Thankyou.