each wave
an ocean's stitch
hemming our seas and land
thus bound as one our tender earth
the tide
- Magyar
- Cape Cod, United States
- __I see with young eyes, an old mirror. Here, I hope to offer... as I see.
Wednesday, August 25, 2010
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You pick your words so carefully and the images are superb. "ocean's stitch" - that is just beyond lovely! Gorgeous, Magyar!
I wish we treated the earth as tenderly as she deserves.
As always I'm impressed by your words!
Greetings:)
I LOVE so much...
What a fitting word image of how the sea ties the earth together. Very nice.
The "ocean´s stich" part also grabbed my attention.
Personally i think this is one of your best Haiku´s so far.
Short yet deep and filled with a brilliant use of the English language.
Thank you all, my friends!
__This was an instant's response, a comment, an echo left at Annie's blog -Inkhaven-. You'd not be dissapointed if you visit there... the link is in the right column.
__Thanks again! _m
It's so good to be reading you again M - often our thoughts are as one as I am sure it is with many of your readers. A superb post.
very good M
john
a beautiful metaphor expressedly sewing us together in cinquain; happy to be a part of this fabric of expression
much love
gillena
A lovely image, Magyar...
Having just come back late last night from Cornwall this resonates so with all that we have seen and done over the week. Thankyou.
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