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Wednesday, November 2, 2011

Just an unseen, unheard echo... to Devika's most recent and heartful haibun. _m

white hair
matching this frosty morning
wise footsteps 


Devika Jyothi said...

it is said when a man is wise enough to watch his steps, he is too old to go anywhere -

to use your favourite contrary clause - i'm not sure i can watch my steps to the extent needed, so i've decided it would be wise not to be anywhere :)

anyway, thank you for the mention, Magyar - name is Devika - 'k' not 'c' - just saying,


ps: btw, always reading, though off from commenting,

Devika Jyothi said...

"so i've decided it would be wise not to be anywhere"

figuratively, but you know that! :)


Lorraine said...

I love this, we don't have snow...yet

Magyar said...

__My typo is now adjusted, thanks
Dev., I really do Cnow its K. :<)

Devika Jyothi said...

Oh never mind, Magyar...i was just easy to find typos by others...then, i too really know that you Cnow! :)


joo said...

White hair and wise steps:)
Love it!

Frieda said...

That's once again expressed very well...
I saw the first snow up in the mountains (but it was just a little bit of it).

Anonymous said...

Hey, I am very careful on frosty mornings.
I seem to always fall when the road is lined wiith bored, backed up traffic.

Gillena Cox said...

Lines 1 and 3 nicely juxtaposed; Line 2 is delightfully placed in composition

much love...

Timoteo said...

What's that old saying: Snow on the in the furnace!

Magyar said...

I do... so fully thank you all! -M