Just an unseen, unheard echo... to Devika's most recent and heartful haibun. _m
white hair
matching this frosty morning
wise footsteps
- Magyar
- Cape Cod, United States
- __I see with young eyes, an old mirror. Here, I hope to offer... as I see.
11 comments:
it is said when a man is wise enough to watch his steps, he is too old to go anywhere -
to use your favourite contrary clause - i'm not sure i can watch my steps to the extent needed, so i've decided it would be wise not to be anywhere :)
anyway, thank you for the mention, Magyar - name is Devika - 'k' not 'c' - just saying,
wishes,
devika
ps: btw, always reading, though off from commenting,
"so i've decided it would be wise not to be anywhere"
figuratively, but you know that! :)
wishes,
devika
I love this, we don't have snow...yet
Ooooops!
__My typo is now adjusted, thanks
Dev., I really do Cnow its K. :<)
Oh never mind, Magyar...i was just saying...so easy to find typos by others...then, i too really know that you Cnow! :)
wishes,
devika
White hair and wise steps:)
Love it!
That's once again expressed very well...
I saw the first snow up in the mountains (but it was just a little bit of it).
Hey, I am very careful on frosty mornings.
I seem to always fall when the road is lined wiith bored, backed up traffic.
Lines 1 and 3 nicely juxtaposed; Line 2 is delightfully placed in composition
much love...
What's that old saying: Snow on the roof...fire in the furnace!
I do... so fully thank you all! -M
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