Home from the pond. A photograph by Edward S. Curtis, circa 1905, drove this thought.
warm pool
in this spring stream rage
dream's maid
- Magyar
- Cape Cod, United States
- __I see with young eyes, an old mirror. Here, I hope to offer... as I see.
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a wonderful way to get clean!
ha! good one Magyar :)
wishes,
devika
This haiku has surreal quality to it. A lot to think about - nice one
enjoyed this M
john
I adore this, what a mood, I'm speechless
Ohlala, I remember a movie like this (or two, three, four ...). But none got so expressive to the point. I love the change of "dream's maid" when it is spoken loud, _m.
Best wishes
Ralf
Friends,
_If you'd care to google Edward S. Curtis, and his photo 'Maid of Dreams,' I'm sure you'll all sense that innocous dream pictured there.
_I thank you all. _m
Innocuous? Well, _m, some won't see it this way - and x-rate this dream. On the other hand they would allow small arms of course for everybody (to stop visual attacks like this) and a little murder in the children's TV (as long as the dead woman is dressed).
Back to some sort of seriousness: Curtis' picture won't find a clue to my dreams. But your haiku is a subtile erotic one to me (what tells more about me, I know ;-).
Best wishes
Ralf
I like what is left to the imagination...wonderful Magyar!
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