__In compliment to Devika's tanka of 10/27/09, "by the same pond;" the echoes may be the fallen leaves floating, those -voices- of the past. _m
ponds
await their icy caps
echoes
- Magyar
- Cape Cod, United States
- __I see with young eyes, an old mirror. Here, I hope to offer... as I see.
16 comments:
Oh Magyar...i don't know how i feel...ice cold for a moment! ha :)
btw, a spelling error in the name -- its Devika not 'c' -- though its fine this way too :)
wishes,
devika
Oh i missed...nice haiku, Magyar; winter is not far, for sure :)
oh now those sweaters and stuff= the only thing i hate about winters,
wishes,
devika
OOOPS! Thanks, Dev... I've korekted my spellink. _m
I like this haiku Magyar. Winter's in the air:)
thancs, Magyar! :)
wishes
devika
Sorry about my deleted comment...spelling error (which is funny after the exchange between you and Devika here).
What I had said was...
Here in the south, winter still seems far away...the days are still somewhat warm at times. I can picture your pond, though...and it brings a chill even under my beautiful November sun. Wonderful writing, Magyar!!!
beautiful.
well done M
john
another good jux'
Hmm I love it, they do don't they, beautiful!
Hmm, no chance for traditionalists then ;-)
wintery pond
a frog
on the blink
Best wishes
Ralf
M,
A very nice piece. I can feel the cold coming...smiles.
T
hats off to you an dev; nice one
much love
gillena
i like this, this reminds me of Holden Caulfield (Catcher in the Rye) asking "Where do the ducks go during winter?".
I like the mix of matter and mind in this one.
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