Looking for the wind.
thoughts linger
among these fallen leaves
a wren
- Magyar
- Cape Cod, United States
- __I see with young eyes, an old mirror. Here, I hope to offer... as I see.
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16 comments:
Nice, Magyar :)
Looking for the wind -- wrong time, i'm afraid :)
wishes,
devika
___As a wren turns the leaves... but one at a time... I look for the wind to stir my thoughts. ___Thanks for the kind comment, Dev.
_m
ha! sounds a windmill of sorts :)
kidding Magyar -- the first thought was that its waves i often associate with that process of stirring thoughts...but then, wind is the primemover there too :)
its always my pleasure to read Magyar :)
wishes,
devika
"fallen leaves" I like that.
Love this, Magyar!
lovely one M
john
Stunning, Magyar. I really love it.
I love all wind, and this is precious my friend ;)
excellent juxtaposition
very enriching thought for imagination Magyar, enjoyed it.
The German word for wren is Zaunkönig (king of the fence). This opens the scene even wider to me, _m. Like it!
Best wishes
Ralf
enjoyed the surprise element of the wren among the fallen leaves
much love
gillena
I like the technique:
It's what we call in German "Scharnierzeile". The second line is linked with the first line and with the third line as well.
thoughts linger
among these fallen leaves
>That is a complete meaning!
among these fallen leaves
a wren
>That's a complete meaning as well!
Well constructed!
Best wishes
Rudi
Yes nicely done, I loved all the recent haiku that you've written. Everyone's comments so educational for new poets like myself, too.
I like these thoughts among the leaves - and yes autumn gives many thoughts to linger with, noty only for a wren ;)
Very nicely turned.
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