A Cinquain of the moment, left as a comment at Talon's blog... here, slightly altered. _m
sunset
a silence ends
the bellow of this day
we travel to that quiet realm
welcomed
- Magyar
- Cape Cod, United States
- __I see with young eyes, an old mirror. Here, I hope to offer... as I see.
16 comments:
very nice, Magyar...Quiet realm, works well with silent sunsets :)
wishes,
devika
Oh you said...silence ends...still, love the quietness :)
wishes,
devika
This is lovely, Magyar. "the bellow of this day" - that's such a wonderful description. I love how this can be interpretated several ways and not only in relation to death. Beautiful writing, as always.
This has such a peaceful quality to it. Very soothing.
How nice! Quiet is something welcome here:)
What a super end to the day Magyar. Beautifully expressed in words...
"the bellow of this day"...anybody who has a demanding boss knows just what this line means!
Oh yes...my WEEK has bellowed...and I am ready to visit that quiet realm this weekend. Beautifully stated and so easy to relate to this. Love it, Doug (trying this first name thing...ha ha) ;)
-Kristin
I didn't manage to find enough words for a cinquain now, but what about this troisuain ?-)
the moon rising
behind the silent horizon --
a white noise
or perhaps just done with the scissors:
rising moon
behind a silent
horizon ...
this white
noise
as welcomed as this beuatiful prose )
beautifully worded cinquain
much love
gillena
My first thought was that this is sad. But it isn't is it? I see it now as serenity and peace, and it's lovely.
__I sincerly thank you all, my friends, and I welcome...both Sandy and Kate! _m
yes excellent one M
john
The many layers of realm make me travel through many pictures. Thanks for that!
Best wishes
Ralf
I love the bellow of this day.
Sincerely,
Dianne
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