This haiku from 2008, its explanation from moments ago. Perhaps, then, it has become a haibun. _m
__Soon to be... as days are longer, the sun warmer and the nights remain cold, this change of pressures causes the sap to flow. New buds will soon stand and redden, as they begin their swell toward the leaves of May.
__Shortly, the taps will be in the maples... the sugar of spring.
old trees
their life begins its flow
closer sun
- Magyar
- Cape Cod, United States
- __I see with young eyes, an old mirror. Here, I hope to offer... as I see.
Sunday, February 7, 2010
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prolific, Magyar :)
wishes,
devika
A lovely set Magyar...
Sun is all I need now:)
Beautiful words!
The sun is definitely shifting and it's very welcome these last few days. I can't wait until the sugar bush is alive again...
The sugar of spring
Old trees.............
THIS IS EXCELLENT !!!
Perfect, Magyar. We have a winter advisory right now, so at least with your beautiful poem, I can dream of the swelling buds of spring. Lovely, Doug!!!
-Kristin
love it M
john
wow you are also the sugar of spring ;) this is so wonderful ;)
excellent.
I can hear spring coming, the birds are starting to sing. Lovely haiku.
Even up here in the north, I can detect a difference, but then, I am a tree watcher!
Even up here in the north, I can detect a difference, but then, I am a tree watcher!
Re-awakening.
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