Pristine snow... .
new snow
paces of those that are...
not yet
- Magyar
- Cape Cod, United States
- __I see with young eyes, an old mirror. Here, I hope to offer... as I see.
Tuesday, February 9, 2010
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Haiku, Senryu, and an occasional Haibun or Cinquain
11 comments:
I love the paced pause brtween the second and third lines - in my mind it can last eternity.
Thank you
Something so tricky about it....sounds like eternity...even when it could be just the next moment -- good one, Magyar :)
wishes,
devika
Wow, Doug! Just...wow. :)
That ellipsis adds the perfect touch. We just got some of that pristine snow this evening :)
new snow again and again!
As usually love it:)
Fresh snow...so soft :) so ethereal!
such enveloping warmth this haiku projects...
Yes, that ellipsis is so anticipating.
Yes, that ellipsis is so anticipating.
good one M
john
Oh, like a clean slate, I like this idea.
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