A repetitive parallel:
Sometimes, I need to step back... to see where I wish to go.
look beyond
see of that pebble
this ruby
- Magyar
- Cape Cod, United States
- __I see with young eyes, an old mirror. Here, I hope to offer... as I see.
Saturday, March 27, 2010
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Very difficult for me. At least it is an abstract scene: one has to decide. And one side promises comfort.
Best wishes
Ralf
PS: It was a long haiku-day. so please forgive my mistakes.
Magyar, I loved this when I read your comment on Lorraine's blog. Sometimes we do need to get a sense of the bigger picture.
Love it, then and Now, wonderful Doug
So often, we look right past the rubies. This is a good stop and think poem.
This is quite wonderful!
Love it!
Margie :)
Magyar,
Stirring my imagination, this poem. Thank you.....pajamas
You are fantastic! I love the way you make me think about my own life when you are reflecting on yours.
love it
john
What I'm getting from this: Look past the exterior to see the diamond (or in this case ruby) in the rough.
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