Haiku, Senryu, and an occasional Haibun or Cinquain
Very lovely, Magyar. You captured the scene just right.
Oh, I really enjoyed this!Great haiku!Margie:)
Captured brilliantly, Magyar. I can see them perfectly.
Lieber Magyar,das gefällt mir auch!!herzlichst, Rachel
This makes me laugh. Now, if they just didn't think that about my garden.
It's really nice - I don't know why, but recalls summer.Greetings:)
Line 3 did it for me; i like the surprise and the humourous twistmuch lovegillena
yep it's all about the last line, loved it ;)
... I think animals have varied senses of reason, innate that it may be.... At their first view of the world, the first thought might be "all I see, belongs to me." The owner._m
love it Mjohn
We got many wild pheasants here; saw two of these in a snowy field under some young birch-trees: the pheasant cock in a deep snow utters a call
How lucky you may be to watch wild turkeys. I envy you.Best wishesRudi
__I heartily thank you all, my friends, new and old! _m
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Very lovely, Magyar. You captured the scene just right.
Oh, I really enjoyed this!
Great haiku!
Margie:)
Captured brilliantly, Magyar. I can see them perfectly.
Lieber Magyar,
das gefällt mir auch!!
herzlichst, Rachel
This makes me laugh. Now, if they just didn't think that about my garden.
It's really nice - I don't know why, but recalls summer.
Greetings:)
Line 3 did it for me; i like the surprise and the humourous twist
much love
gillena
yep it's all about the last line, loved it ;)
... I think animals have varied senses of reason, innate that it may be.
... At their first view of the world, the first thought might be "all I see, belongs to me." The owner.
_m
love it M
john
We got many wild pheasants here; saw two of these in a snowy field under some young birch-trees:
the pheasant cock
in a deep snow
utters a call
How lucky you may be to watch wild turkeys. I envy you.
Best wishes
Rudi
__I heartily thank you all, my friends, new and old! _m
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