A reaction, an instant's echo left at John's... Zen Speug; a reflection of his good haiku. _m
scarecrow
standing at the field's edge
a bus stops
- Magyar
- Cape Cod, United States
- __I see with young eyes, an old mirror. Here, I hope to offer... as I see.
14 comments:
This one...very visual.
Can almost imagine the colors.
By all means let him go to Scotland, a good Magyar
I almost read this like the city encroaching on the country. And then I think what need of a scarecrow when the noisy buses are nearby? Interesting one, Magyar!
A very vivid haiku...
I liked this one, too. Had to laugh, crows are raising a fuss in my backyard now, I should peek out to see what it is about, I guess.
a wee beauty M
john
lol I love it i can only imagine the bird entering the bus and little screeching noises from the people ;)
beautiful. I agree with Frank, it is very vivid.
These s sound like ... what they are ment to be.
Best wishes
Ralf
Funny! The scarescrow must be made well. Will it get on the bus?
Best wishes
Rudi
Na, du großer Meister des Haiku,
nun habe ich alles nachgelesen, was ich versäumt habe, als ich im Krankenhaus war und ich muss sagen, du hast wundervolle Erkenntnisse dabei, ich bewundere dich
lieb, Rachel
How easily we can be tricked by the eye...and the mind...liked it a lot.
Very nice. I love the shifting view in this. Happy to return your visit. I know I'll be back.
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