There comes a time... .
steps back
into the swollen shadows
this calm
- Magyar
- Cape Cod, United States
- __I see with young eyes, an old mirror. Here, I hope to offer... as I see.
Saturday, November 6, 2010
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Haiku, Senryu, and an occasional Haibun or Cinquain
15 comments:
Nice haiku, Magyar :)
wishes,
devika
A very nice haiku, Magyar. 'swollen shadows' is unusual but very effective...
There's a softness to this, but also traces of melancholy. Sometimes we do need to retreat and find that peaceful place. Lovely writing, D.
I picked up the strong feeling in this one, too. I'm getting a feeling that it is tied to you long poem from the other day.
very nice!!!
Dev. My long time friend, I thank you for your kind visits!
Frank, Often... with the light source at a low angle, the shadow is larger than the projecting image, swollen.
K, I thank you, you being able to read into me... sometimes I need to step aside.
Sandy, Often things are seen in the shadows that... can't be seen during the brightest light.
Cindy, always heartful... I thank you for your warm remark.
As always, my friends, _m
The calm is all I nedde at the moment!
Thanks:)
intentionally? wow I love this Doug and look at you responding to cmments, I feel like a proud mama
__In the appropriate time zones... did we all turn our clocks back correctly and in a timely fashion?
Gosh how beautifully said M - often what we take to be the shadow is the substance...
Time turned back the night before :)
Ahh Janice...
__I'm always so pleased to see your comments; I hope your painting contracts are doing well!
_m
Indeed, simplicity is the key of genius,very nice Magyar_BB
The true nature of a smile
That simple wisdom often found
Among the blades of grass.
BB, as always... I thank you for your understanding!
Proud Mama! as always! _m
... um passo para trĂ¡s pode adiantar o caminho.
Bom golpe d'alma!
__Obrigado pela sua compreensao
especie, Hanrique!
_m
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