"!BREAKING NEWS!"
__That, now meaningless TV phrase, I'll use as a metaphor to say: "quickly home!"
__Below, a soft echo to Lorraine's most recent and fine post... as life regains itself. _m
bridges
crossing times rivers
infants
- Magyar
- Cape Cod, United States
- __I see with young eyes, an old mirror. Here, I hope to offer... as I see.
11 comments:
I'm so touched Doug, this is marvelous x
Nice one, Magyar...
Perfect!
__Oooo... I thank you, Lorraine, Sandy and Frank, but in pedantic self-critisism, and in view of the metaphor I mentioned above, some say 'a metaphor has no place in haiku/senryu.' But I see such small change 'tween metaphor, and juxtapose. _m
well done M
john
Doug, thanks for your comment on my little poem.
Your senryu is lovely--and so are Lorraine's blogs!!
Simply and beautifully eloquent, D. (as always) :)
nice one; and you resonate Lorraine well
much love...
Magyar,
Since each of us is on Cape Cod, shouldn't we meet? I'll buy you lunch or dinner. Best wishes.....pajamas
Quick home...
__I thank you all! -M
... Simply and beautifully, Doug. I love it.
Best wishes,
Karol
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