Soon; this from late last Septober, or perhaps it was Octember_?
yellow leaves
float down this tired river
three ducks
- Magyar
- Cape Cod, United States
- __I see with young eyes, an old mirror. Here, I hope to offer... as I see.
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10 comments:
Beautiful, Magyar! Still green leaves here, but few more days and they'll start turning yellow:)
Have a nice weekend
j.
the hint at subtle movement is nicely expressed the ducks, the leaves
much love...
nice one M
john
I love this, if it were duck instead of ducks it would tell another story, I love it
One of the first signs that autumn is approaching--yellow leaves in the river. How lovely!!!
__I thank you all... and soon I'll be spending more time blogging, the summer fading away as it is.
_m
Turning "float" into "floating" would make line 2 a pivot, if you're interested.
Hello Bill!
__Thanks for the observation, and I fully understand; I dislike "ing words," and avoid them whenever I can... I choose the verb-ish rather than the noun-ish. A rather incorrect trait, I expect.
__Good to see you've returned!
A gentle poem, Magyar...
Congratulations on your great site! Congratulations and good continuation!
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