__I am the splash that missed this funnel's gaping mouth; free, and not locked into this bottle of someone elses preset rules, I trickle down this glassn' side, and evaporate into my own adventure.
a free drop
travels its chosen path
the bird flys
a free drop
travels its chosen path
the bird flys
17 comments:
Yes, we all must evaporate into our own adventures!
__And as the 'Evaporated' Jen, we can remain the 'Unseen'. Smiles_! _m
the genie
escapes
the stoppered bottle
Beautiful haiku.
Lovely, and leaves plenty of room for reflexion. :)
Love this haiku! Thanks for the your comment in my blog - it's so good to be here again.
Lieber Magyar,
fantastisch durchdacht. Und meine Gedanken regt es an.
Dir ein gutes Wochenende
herzlichst,
Rachel
__That pop of the cork, Gwil.
Bob, always my thanks, and too... for your grand photos.
__Joo, so good to see and your posts again, you've been missed.
Gisele, your kind thoughts... cause inner smiles, nifty.
__Rachel, to speak of thoughts, yours and mine seem so often parallel.
Thanks Friends... I fully appreciate your kind comments_!
_m
free falling
until it reaches
the climax of its journey~
Good Afternoon, _m.
I always enjoy your blog :}
one moment
in that space of comments
sonic boom
__Thanks for your "Visit-Verse", Jan. Neat_!
Dear Magyar,
I love your haiku and all your visits and comments on my blog.
You are charming and mindful.
All the best
Iris ;)
Aah...how this conjures up such a powerful sense of freedom.
Just out of reach...but more than an adventure in my dreams!
Wonderful!! :))
Pure and lovely.
And ooooh_!!!
__My additional and appreciated thanks to Iris, "Y", and to "BB"_! Interested in great bird photos (?) please visit "Forest of Dean" Bob's blog! _m
To each his way , and the world will live in peace .
Thank you Daniele_! The paths we choose.
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