__Breezes, as they cross the meadows green; meadows, rising as the tides, a tree's spring leaves. _m
tidal breeze
that rolls across this meadow
green sea
as buds burst
leaves stretch to the sun
a cat's purr
tidal breeze
that rolls across this meadow
green sea
as buds burst
leaves stretch to the sun
a cat's purr
20 comments:
So kommt der Frühling gut bei mir an, lieber Magyar.
Du weckst mit deinen Worten viele Sinne.
Dir noch eine gute Woche
LG; Rachel
__With my awakened senses... to you too, Rachel, I wish a great week_! _m
beautiful image of the leaves unfurling as the cat purrs....
Both of these are nicely turned.
Lovingly put.
Beautifully moving...just as the Spring's tide moves within me...your amazing talent creates the visual image of Nature's perfection.:))
Lovely and beautiful
Paintings in words
Very nice, _m.
Jan
As I read your poem, it took me there, without my even leaving my chair.
Beautiful!!!
luv them both, my favorite, the second one for its juxtaposition
have a nice weekend Magyar
much love...
Beautiful! It could have been written here.
what a glorious time of year when everything springs to life.
Glad you are enjoying the tidal breezes, Doug.
Life is a breeze
If only they knew it
dark men of confusion
I love them:)
I could close my eyes and feel the words after reading this...great job.
__I truely thank you all: Juliet, "Y", Jan, Gillena, Moonie, Joo, Bob, Lon, Gwilym, and I welcome you Sandy and Kieth_! _m
I wish I was there right now. Lovely.
Beautiful! I especially love the second one, with the cat's purr -- great use of imagery! :)
love this.
Thanks Gisele, so good to see you, 'tis been a while!
__Sandy_ Maine, and Sandy_ California... East to West... my thanks to you both!
_m
You're welcome, Magyar! It has been a while -- the weeks have just been whooshing by! Hope you have a wonderful month of May! :)
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