__It seems from what I've seen of late, that I should no longer define the differences between haiku and senryu as I view them; open windows.
rain fall
in this warm wind sky
soft songs
rain fall
in this warm wind sky
soft songs
- Magyar
- Cape Cod, United States
- __I see with young eyes, an old mirror. Here, I hope to offer... as I see.
15 comments:
An ode
A sonnet or
A limerick
A poem by any other name is still a poem.
An owl
A raven or
An eagle
A bird by any other name is still a poem.
i like what Gwil said.
and I love your "haiku" or...
the pitter-patter
adrift on the wind
a lullaby ~
so pretty, _m.
Jan
"Senryu" is a term that has never caught on in the U.S., and we probably don't need it. We can speak of comic haiku, satirical haiku, and so on.
gentle tones
spring's green clad conductor
breathe deep
__I thank you, Sandy, Jan and Moonie. Thanks Qwilym, very interesting, and Chief my appreciation to you as well! _m
Ah . . . such a beautiful song it is.
Aah...that wonderful wind song, serenading the soft rainfall...sheer magic!!
Oh how I love the image this beautiful piece conjures up...:))
"Y", and Lon... I thank you for your kind comments... Earth songs. _m
So nice, M...
your haiku: open
as a window, or a hand
inviting in all
~
__Welcome Jen, I value your comments. M., that 'open window' is... an overall invitation to opinionate; your verse is so well understood and appreciated. My thanks to you both_! _m
I'm beginning to think that 'senryu' and 'haiku' are false distinctions....
I thank you Juliet_!
__With exception to the -sound points- that language, translatable syllable count, I will remain within that historic realm of senryu/haiku definitions... fool that I am. Smiles_!
_m
The percentages would increase in course of time. Useful information indeed. Thanks.
mon avenir gratuitement
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