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__I see with young eyes, an old mirror. Here, I hope to offer... as I see.

Friday, August 12, 2016

__ There is always something to surge our thoughts forward_!   This,  a slight rewrite of something I posted here during August_  of 2010.

flat pond
this summer stands still
fish rings


Gwil W said...

The lazy summer carp
Growing in the ponds
Winter is behind the forest

Bill said...

Nice. And there's a haiku inside your haiku

flat pond
the summer
stands still

Magyar said...

__ Ah Gwilym, those indolent carp, the only movement their gills syphoning oxygen and microscopic calories as they grow into the hidden winter.

Oooo, Bill!
__ Lovit, such a grand echo, thanks and I hope you keep this reflection for continued use. Nifty!

Thanks friends! _m

Gisele LeBlanc said...

Oh, I can feel the stillness. Wonderful imagery! :)

Jan said...

still waters
long hot days
pea green soup~

Happy Sunday, _m.

Sandy said...

I can see this! A perfect August poem.

Gillena Cox said...

silence -
between moon and fish
a ripple

much love...

Optimistic Existentialist said...

Very true words....indeed

TALON said...

It's like the circle of life. :)

Bob Bushell said...

Love your words, so poetic.

Magyar said...

__ Friends, I truely appreciate your visits and comments! _m

sandy said...

i see it, thanks.

Crafty Green Poet said...

lovely image