__ There is always something to surge our thoughts forward_! This, a slight rewrite of something I posted here during August_ of 2010.
flat pond
this summer stands still
fish rings
flat pond
this summer stands still
fish rings
- Magyar
- Cape Cod, United States
- __I see with young eyes, an old mirror. Here, I hope to offer... as I see.
13 comments:
The lazy summer carp
Growing in the ponds
Winter is behind the forest
Nice. And there's a haiku inside your haiku
flat pond
the summer
stands still
__ Ah Gwilym, those indolent carp, the only movement their gills syphoning oxygen and microscopic calories as they grow into the hidden winter.
Oooo, Bill!
__ Lovit, such a grand echo, thanks and I hope you keep this reflection for continued use. Nifty!
Thanks friends! _m
Oh, I can feel the stillness. Wonderful imagery! :)
still waters
long hot days
pea green soup~
Happy Sunday, _m.
I can see this! A perfect August poem.
silence -
between moon and fish
a ripple
much love...
Very true words....indeed
It's like the circle of life. :)
Love your words, so poetic.
__ Friends, I truely appreciate your visits and comments! _m
i see it, thanks.
lovely image
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