__ This, an edit of an instant's Cinquain comment I left at Gillena's nifty blog, Lunch Break, as listed in my blog list. Yes, hear is hear as we may hear... the hammering waves; the sands return. _m
The seas
grind stone to sand
with years of hammered waves
then move its toil from hear, to there,
to here.
The seas
grind stone to sand
with years of hammered waves
then move its toil from hear, to there,
to here.
14 comments:
Well done _m!!! Love the play on words 💮
Such a delightful one to read. Warm greetings to you!
lovely haiku.
Timeless
Pleasantly playful.
What a hard work by waves of time ,often they do same to men
Well done. An interesting way to use hear and here.
Adelaide
I like sounds and rythm very much !
sometimes on the bow
the roar of a wave that falls
spirals of foam
women are so beautiful
in their wedding dress
Friends, I extend my thanks to you all.
__ Daniele, that 'whitewater wave' is a nifty metaphor! _m
Wow...so eloquently expressed!
Isn't that exactly how the sea is, how it sculptures the sand and rock into ever-changing art forms?
Oh this is WONDERFUL!!
So good to be back...:))
__ To yell out the feeling, WOW_! So good to see you "Y". I thank you for your visit and kind comment. Hope all is well with you and yours! _m
lovely with a rhthym like the sea itself
The sea is unstoppable. It has its own way of doing and being. Take or leave. The sea couldn't care less.
__ Continued thanks, my friends!
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