__ Now, a minimal rewrite of this haiku, first seen at the site >Haikuniverse< on March 16th of this year. Such grand and busy birds, these "hawks of nectar." _m
hummingbirds
discuss this flower garden
house cats wish
- Magyar
- Cape Cod, United States
- __I see with young eyes, an old mirror. Here, I hope to offer... as I see.
7 comments:
I will bet they do! It is a good thing cats can't fly.
Lieber Magyar,
ja, Kuscheltiere können auch anders, aber Vögel sind auch nicht dumm.
In deinen Gedanken lese ich die Buntheit dieser Vögel und die Spannung
der Katze, ja, herrliche Bilder hast du gezaubert.
Dir von Herzen eine gute Zeit
wünscht lieb, Rachel
__ Sandy and Rachel, my thanks to you both for your nifty comments; from "the cat can not fly," to... "the tension of the cat," respectively. Neat. _m
I can see this very clearly,
Ahhh....how sweet it is!
Hope you and your family are having a lovely summer Magyar. :-)
What a wonderful poem. I love hummingbirds...
__ The 'sweet' nectar, as 'hummingbirds' sing their song; within your kind comments, I thank you, Geraldine and Lisa_!
_m
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